2012년 1월 6일 금요일

Ode to my Flash Light

Oh flash light,  Flast light
how kind of you
how nice of you

you make us see in the dark
you make things bright like a sunshine

Oh flash light, Flash light
how kind of you
how nice fo you

Flash light, you are a savior
for hikers at night time
Flash light, you are a savior
when the light get out in dormitary

How kind you always saving us
how kind you always helping us

My flash light you are same as my life

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  1. Joonghyuk,

    Good ode! It's interesing that you chose the flashlight as a subject. Overall, your writing was able to express an ode to the flashlight in a cohesive and grammatically correct manner. Keep it up and I look forward to seeing more original ideas in your blog entries.

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